When I was in London with Avensino, three maybe four years ago, we were visiting Madame Tussauds me and Marco fell behind the group. We started playing with an interactive screen.
My mom called me and said that we thought was the last part of the visit.
We tried to find an exit but just kept going in circles until we went through a door that led us to the first room and then we went outside. We searched for the museum exit and when we found it there was no one there, so I called my mom and she said that she was still inside and that the part that was supposed to be the last one wasn’t, so we waited for them for about half an hour and we couldn’t go back inside.
You should have written an introduction. Instead of starting with: "when I was in London" you could use that as an introduction just by adapting it. For example: The story I'm about to tell happened two, maybe three, years aog in London.
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